Ghosts

I want your input into this song. It can be heard at my My Space page.

starstraf asked me about this when I first posted a link to the song. It's a song about a little town dying out slowly and my mourning of this. In it there is a mention of Walmart making it impossible for the town to ever thrive again. I am worried that this will unbalance the song. The song is not about Walmart, since it had nothing to do with the demise of the town, but the reaction to the verse has been mixed. Below the cut I have two versions of the lyrics, the original, and a rewrite with the Walmart verse cut out. What do you think?

[Poll #825049]

( The Lyrics )

Arrrrr

I'm thinking Captain Blood tonight ...

I am upset that Threepenny is on the shelf in Ames

Oh ...

My standard comment when good things happen is

::doing the happy puppy dance::

I finally got a good puppy dance icon ... stole it from someone the other day ... cant remember who ... but ...